Daena

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media type="custom" key="8935294" __Speech Evaluation 2011__ NAME: Daena TOPIC: Teenagers TIME:  3:03 __Teacher’s Comments__ An informative and humourous speech, Daena. You delivered it really well - great use of your cue cards! Good structure to your speech, I like the way your have personalised it. You just need to work on your pace as you “rushed” it. Well done!
 * 1 || Introduction || How well you hooked your audience || 10 || 8.5  ||
 * 2 || Structure || How well you organised your material. Main points developed well || 10 || 8  ||
 * 3 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Use of Language || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Grammar, punctuation, word selection used to enhance, use of visual imagery || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">4  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">4 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Ideas || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Did your ideas have interest, originality, depth || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">15 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">13  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Convey Meaning || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Convey meaning to illustrate point of view || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">8  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">6 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Audience || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Was it at their level, did it have them hooked, does it have impact. Judges will watch reaction || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">8  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">7 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Stance / Notes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Body posture, eye contact. Use of notes (cue cards) || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">8 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Expressiveness || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">How well you used your eyes, facial expression, gestures to enhance NOT detract from speech || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">9  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">9 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Voice || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Good volume, pace, pitch, emphasis, pausing and vocal interest || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">15 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">12  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Conclusion || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Good ending. Did you leave your audience something to think about? || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">3.5  ||
 * ||  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> TOTAL || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">100  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">84  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Conclusion || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Good ending. Did you leave your audience something to think about? || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">3.5  ||
 * ||  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> TOTAL || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 18.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">100  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">84  ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">__**NAME:**__Daena Govender <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I chose the **Hoatzin** to write my report on. <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">I self - assessed my report against the following success criteria <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">__**TASK:**__ write an information report on an animal of your choice <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Success Criteria: <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">• report is organised in correct format (classification, description, summarising comment) <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">• report includes technical vocabulary unique to subject matter <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">• report includes a variety of action verbs (climb, eat, erupt) <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">• report is written in timeless present tense (are, exist, grow)


 * || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Beginning || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Developing  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Achieved  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Mastered  ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Format || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report does not follow the required structure || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report mostly follows the correct format. Has at least 2 parts to body. Eg, Description, Habitat etc. || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report follows the correct format. Has at least 3 parts to body. Eg, Description, Habitat, Behaviour || <span style="background-color: #b4a7d6; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report follows the correct format, including summarising statement. Has at least 3 parts to body. Eg, Description, Habitat, Behaviour etc ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Technical Vocabulary || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">No evidence of technical vocabulary || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 2 technical words || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 3 technical words || <span style="background-color: #b4a7d6; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 4 technical words ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Action Verbs || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">No evidence of action verbs || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 2 action verbs || <span style="background-color: #b4a7d6; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 3 technical words || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 4 technical words ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14.66px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Tense || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report is not written in timeless present tense || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Some of the report is written in the timeless present tense || <span style="background-color: #b4a7d6; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Most of the report is written in the timeless present tense || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 12px; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">All of the report is written in the timeless present tense ||