Ellie

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__Speech Evaluation 2011__

NAME: Ellie TOPIC: Ashtray Beaches TIME:  2:40
 * 1 || Introduction || How well you hooked your audience || 10 || 7 ||
 * 2 || Structure || How well you organised your material. Main points developed well || 10 || 8 ||
 * 3 || Use of Language || Grammar, punctuation, word selection used to enhance, use of visual imagery || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">4 ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">4 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Ideas || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Did your ideas have interest, originality, depth || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">15 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">13 ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Convey Meaning || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Convey meaning to illustrate point of view || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">8 ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">6 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Audience || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Was it at their level, did it have them hooked, does it have impact. Judges will watch reaction || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">7 ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">7 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Stance / Notes || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Body posture, eye contact. Use of notes (cue cards) || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">7 ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">8 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Expressiveness || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">How well you used your eyes, facial expression, gestures to enhance NOT detract from speech || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">7 ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">9 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Voice || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Good volume, pace, pitch, emphasis, pausing and vocal interest || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">15 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">12 ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Conclusion || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Good ending. Did you leave your audience something to think about? || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 ||
 * ||  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> TOTAL || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">100 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">78 ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">10 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Conclusion || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Good ending. Did you leave your audience something to think about? || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">5 ||
 * ||  || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> TOTAL || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 14pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">100 || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">78 ||

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Syncopate; font-size: 11pt; vertical-align: baseline;">__Teacher’s Comments__

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">An informative speech, Ellie. I like the way you have used visual language within your speech. You spoke clearly and confidently and you left the audience with something to think about. A well constructured speech - great effort!!

<span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">NAME: Ellie I chose the <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 11pt; vertical-align: baseline;">__Wild Mustang__ <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Georgia; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> to write my report on

I self - assessed my report against the following success criteria

TASK: write an information report on an animal of your choice

Success Criteria: • report is organised in correct format (classification, description, summarising comment) • report includes technical vocabulary unique to subject matter • report includes a variety of action verbs (climb, eat, erupt) • report is written in timeless present tense (are, exist, grow)


 * || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Beginning || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Developing || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Achieved || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-align: center; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Mastered ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Format || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report does not follow the required structure || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report mostly follows the correct format. Has at least 2 parts to body. Eg, Description, Habitat etc. || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report follows the correct format. Has at least 3 parts to body. Eg, Description, Habitat, Behaviour || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report follows the correct format, including summarising statement. Has at least 3 parts to body. Eg, Description, Habitat, Behaviour etc ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Technical Vocabulary || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">No evidence of technical vocabulary || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 2 technical words || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 3 technical words || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 4 technical words ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;"> Action Verbs || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">No evidence of action verbs || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 2 action verbs || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 3 technical words || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report contains at least 4 technical words ||
 * <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 11pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Tense || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Report is not written in timeless present tense || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Some of the report is written in the timeless present tense || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #000000; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">Most of the report is written in the timeless present tense || <span style="background-color: transparent; color: #0000ff; font-family: Arial; font-size: 9pt; text-decoration: none; vertical-align: baseline;">All of the report is written in the timeless present tense ||

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